Message Revision for Best Baby Gear

Best Baby Gear takes pride in specializing in products for parents of newborns, infants, and toddlers. Your product appears to be well-built and stylish and would be a great asset to the award-winning website, www.bestbabygear.com. Best Baby Gear strives to receive only the best products on the market and we feel that Inglesina is one of them. If you decide that you want Best Baby Gear to sell your product, you will not be disappointed. Best Baby Gear accepts only top-quality brands and accepts only items that will sell successfully. A lot of effort is put into Best Baby Gear and your product will not fail here, it will thrive. People respect Best Baby gear and recognize its quality, dependability, and stylishness. Inglesina would be the perfect addition to our company and we would like you to consider adding your line to it.

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Audience Profile

An advertisement for peanut butter.
Audience: The audience will most likely be young children or moms.
Audience's general attitude toward subject: The audience's attitude is an excepting one. Most everyone loves peanut butter, but they want to make sure they get the best quality for the cheapest price. Mother's are especially wanting a good product that is nutritious for their children too.
What does my audience need to know?: The audience needs to know why this peanut butter is better than other brands and why they should purchase it.

A request (to the seller) for a price adjustment on a piano that incurred $150 in damage during delivery to a banquet room in the hotel you manage.
Audience: Most likely the manager of the piano company.
Audience's general attitude toward subject: The audience will probably be frustrated that damage occurred during delivery, but wants to keep business high so he or she will be willing to negotiate.
What does my audience need to know?: The audience needs to know exactly what the damage was and when it occurred. The audience also needs to know the cost of the damage and what he or she can do to fix it.

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Ethics

I found many things interesting during this week of classes, however the most interesting thing to me was how ethics relates to the media. It seems to me that many people, journalists, organizations, etc. have thrown ethics out the window. There have been many occasions when the information that is being relayed to the audience has been tampered with, making it hard for people to know what to believe. Two major groups of people I can think of that are affected by this are celebrities and politicians. For example, Tiger Woods seems to be in the media a lot lately because of his alleged affairs. However, what is society supposed to believe? There are so many stories going around that are not ethical and situations like this one happen all the time. Everyone needs to start reporting more ethical information because great consequences can occur if unethical information is reported.

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Expectations

I have quite a few expectations for this class. First of all, I am expecting to learn how to properly prepare e-mails, cover letters, resumes, etc. All of these things will be very beneficial in the working world, but also very beneficial when I am applying for jobs or internships. Secondly, I am expecting to learn how to correctly create memos, business letters, and business e-mails. Having the proper business writing skills will make me more knowledgeable and will make me more respected by my fellow colleagues. By knowing all of these things, I will be more prepared for the business world.